Saturday, February 16, 2008

Time Travel Advisory!

SeastepsSlippery steps of time,
connecting sea to sky,
connecting then to now
and now to evermore.
Be careful not to fall!



Prompt from Writers
Island


Also as of May 18, 2008 - Warning! - a prompt from Mad
Kane


Seasteps photo taken April 20, 2000 in Newport, RI

11 comments:

Chris said...

simple and simply wonderful.

keith hillman said...

Perfect example of less being more. Nice one,

Just Jen said...

That picture is really cool. I've never seen anything like that! Good take on the prompt!

gautami tripathy said...

Very evocative. It sure rings true..

seeds travelling tthrough time

tumblewords said...

Beautiful scene and evocative words - short, lovely and truthy!

Preethi said...

lovely.. short and sweet but yet so deep!! :)

Here is my take - I live On...

Jeques said...

Your minimalist approach to this works.

I wish you well.

~ Jeques

LittleWing said...

beautiful.. love the beach...

Mad Kane said...

Lovely poem and photo!

Crafty Green Poet said...

oh i know that type of step, very slippery, your warning is certainly to be heeded!

Lilibeth said...

What a great picture and analogy. I loved it.