my random and irregular musings on stuff -
comments are welcomed and encouraged
The poem strikes a chord.. a wonderful read, and the word play is fascinating.. the images you conjure are breathtaking!
This is interesting..well said.. tapping of foot..sounds so good..
Beautiful--I sense the gratitude and wonder and joy.
I like comparing the clouds to a parade!
Such uplifting and hopeful words...I loved the positive spirit in this poem!
Getting ready to step ahead, towards the light and lifes hight. Please have a good Monday.daily athens
I like this ...well said!
Love this, Moe!Made me fill up with wonder just reading it....
Wonderful word play!I watch while the mountains crumble
Cooool. Can feel it.
Love it! Beautiful pic as well!
moments when we could be happiest and free from the worries and cares of life...:)i simply loved the feeling painted by words... :)
Very nicely written tanka you have. I like the passing of the clouds, both in your poem and literally. I have some videos of passing clouds...
So simple and yet elegant...
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